For this draft I am most concerned about the content. I am still not sure if it fits the criteria for the assignment. I rewrote the whole paper after the first draft didn’t work out so well. I am also concerned with my integration of the different kinds of writing within the inquiry. On my last paper, I needed work on my transitions and that is something that I think I improved on, but I am still not sure about them. I am also not sure about how well the paper flows or if my point is easy for the reader to figure out.
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